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第四部分：写作（共两节，满分35分）
第一节 短文改错 (共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分)
请修改下面的短文。短文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1. 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2. 只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
It is well-known that good habits do us good all our life. Entered high school, I took delight in having fast food and often eat too much. In the end, I was so serious overweight that I suffered a lot from my awkward appearance. It made matters worse was the fact that my classmates made a fun of me at times. From now on, I made up my mind to avoiding snacks. In the meanwhile, I took off jogging to lose weight. To my surprise, it was not long until I did succeed in creating my new appearance. Only then I start to appreciate the importance of developing a good habit.
第二节：书面表达（满分25分）
每年都有许多人出国旅游，一些人的不文明行为引起了社会的广泛关注。某英语报社正在举行以“文明出国旅游”为主题的讨论。假定你是李华，请你给报社专栏编辑写一封信，呼吁大家做文明游客。要点如下：
1. 尊重习俗；  2. 不高声喧哗；  3. 其它。
注意 1. 词数100左右；  2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.  
                                                                                                                                        
Yours,
Li Hua

2016届高三年级第九次月考英语试题答案
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阅读 DCC;  BAAB; DBDB;  DACA; FGACD
完形ACBCC; BDADD; CADCA; BCBAD;
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66.But  67.to promote 68.willing  69.whether   70.Honestly
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作文
Dear Editor,
I’ve read your discussion on how to behave properly when traveling abroad.
Every year, a great many holidaymakers go abroad for sightseeing and relaxation. While they are enjoying themselves, some of them behave rudely, which causes a big problem. How to be a civilized tourist has become a heated topic.
In my opinion, it is necessary to watch our manners. First, we must respect and follow local customs. Besides, we’d better not talk loudly in public places to avoid disturbance to others. Also, be aware that queue jumping is unacceptable in many countries. More importantly, we should bear in mind that we are representing our country while abroad, so we need to be cautious about how we act.
Only in this way can we enjoy our trip abroad and have beautiful memories as well.
Yours,
Li Hua
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