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第四部分 写作（共两节；满分35分）
第一节 短文改错（共10小题；每小题1分，满分10分）
假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用(＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

Two men were traveling together while a bear suddenly met them. One of them climbed up into the tree. The other, seeing that he must be attacked, immediate lay on his back on the ground. When the bear came up, feeling him with his nose and smelt him all over, he held breath. The bear soon left him, for it’s said that a bear won’t touches a dead body. When he was gone, the other travelers went down from the tree. And he asked his friend that the bear had whispered to his ear. “He gave me a piece of advice,” his companion replied. “Never to travel with a friend who deserts you in the face of danger.” 

第二节 书面表达（满分25分）
假如你是李明，上周你班同学就“毕业前我们该为学校做些什么？”进行了讨论。请你根据以下内容要点，将同学们的建议用英语写一封信告诉你的笔友David, 并谈谈你的想法及理由。
1.为图书馆捐书； 2.美化校园；  3.刻苦学习。
注意：
    1.词数120左右；
2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。
Dear David,
Last week we held an enthusiastic discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate.                                                                                                               
 
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江西省八校2016届高三第二次联考英语参考答案
1-5 AACAB     6-10 CCACC    11-15 BCCBA     16-20 BBBAC
21-23 DCD     24-27 ABDC     28-31 CBBA      32-35 ADBA   36-40 DEBGF
41-45 AACBB    46-50 DDCAA   51-55 CBDAD 56-60 BCBAC
61. largest    62. covering     63. from      64. majority 65.The
66. abundant    67. generally 68. which  69. are harvested 70.mentioning
 
改错：
 
One possible version:
Dear David,
Last week we held an enthusiastic discussion on what we should do for our school before we graduate. The students in our class have various practical suggestions.
Firstly, we’ve agreed to do something meaningful, such as collecting money to purchase some books for the school library, for it needs more science fictions.
Secondly, we feel like doing some voluntary work such as planting trees and flowers in and around our schoolyard. It could be an excellent choice for us to beautify our environment.
Finally, we have to be determined to study hard to get better results in the coming exams and make greater progress so that our school may feel very proud of us. For my part, I hold the idea that we’ll do as we can to contribute ourselves to our school in our spare time and set a good example for our fellows.
I’m wondering if you can give me some advice.
Best wishes.
Yours friendly,
Li Ming
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