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My name is Li Hua. It is a great honor for me to be here with you and have the chance to give a speech.I would like to be the director of our English corner.
To start with ,I have a strong interest in English and i once came first in the English and once came first in the e English speech contest held in our school. Secondly, i am kind and outgoing , which makes it easy for me to get along with others. What’s more, i have some experience in organizing English activities for our school’s English club.
I would appreciate it if you would consider me for the position. If chosen,i will make every effort to serve you all well.
Thank you!
【解析】这是一篇演讲文写作。文章的大体写作方向和主要内容题目中已经给出。写作时要注意逻辑顺序和词汇的选择。，注意文章的连贯性与句子的通顺性。文章第一段简要介绍了自己的基本信息，以及自己演讲的目的，第二段介绍了自己的优点以及竞选的优势，第三段写了自己的期望以及感激。结构清楚，条理清晰。文章中使用了很多句型，如it is a great honor for sb to do sth，I would appreciate it if……I would like to do sth等等，使文章句型丰富多彩，除此之外文章用to start with, Secondly，what’s more来分别叙述自己的优势，逻辑清晰。并且文中使用了很多高级词汇，如experience，interest，organize等，这些高级词的使用给文章增色不少。总结：写作时要多用高级词汇，不要局限于简单句和常规词。句式要富于变化，结构要严谨，逻辑清楚，条理清晰。
考点：考查演讲稿写作。
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